Gail Shaw wrote:

> I've been tweaking this on and off for a couple of months now,
> so unless there are massive comments I think it's done.

Very cool, so cool I'll pick it apart with suggestions:

1) Wood looks a little bit too new and the furniture a bit too fragile,
like something you'd see on sale at Office Depot.
2) More books: empty shelves--is it a new magician or what?
3) More contrast between books--make them big tomes.
4) I don't like the edges of the rock structures.
5) Misty ground is cool, but shouldn't there be some way to get in &
out?

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